The fox leads her toward a ring of tents and
torches and people around an aromatic fire.
Lily is shushed when she tries to introduce herself.
This one gave me a lot of trouble, and was where the wheels started coming off the wagon soon before the hiatus happened... Must forge ahead! Tell the story even if it hurts sometimes! (Using "toward" twice in two parts hurts, too.)
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